With Water,
I dance in its favour,
Swaying;
Igniting;
Touching;
Rising;
Loving;
Uprising;
Falling;
Ascending;
Cooling;
Calming;
Growing;
Reflecting;
Healing;
Talking;
Living;
Dreaming;
Lighting;
In every way, I see;
Within me;
Within you;
Within others;
Within everything.
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Bright Blessings and Love,
Joker Green
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Author:
Nafis Light (
Offline) - Published: February 18th, 2020 09:21
- Category: Nature
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Good Evening JOKER ! We love the Style & Substance of this EL GRECO POEM ! The average.HUMAN is over 60% water which is why we have such an affinity with it, We can last three weeks without food but only three days without water ! The shape of your Poem resembes a Waterfall ~ My (B) fave form of Water ~ I love sliding down & Climbing up waterfalls ~ AMEN Angela prefers Lakes & Esturies for Sailing ! The 17 adjectives / adverbs you use to describe water are perfect and add action & life. In Nature water is everywhere ~ mostly constructive ~ but also destructive F L O O D S !!!!! Without water there is no LIFE. Th Sun driven Water Cycle is one of GODS great blessings to Planet Earth we should never take such Blessings for granted or grumble when it rains. Always buy a house on Higher Ground and NEVER on the bank of a RIVER ! Thanks for another wicked Poem ! Please check our POEM ~ Thanks
Blesings & Peace to You & Yours
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 💛💛💛
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