Sitting next to you
Completely out of control
Not knowing what is happening
Just there for the ride
Complete trust in you
Putting my mind at ease
Complete comfort
Finally relaxed
No need to think
Or be in control
Being your passenger
Brings me peace
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Author:
Skie Khaleesi (
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Comments1
being passengers in each others journey is a beautiful metaphor.
I can feel the peace in your poem.
I really like the line about being out of control. You allow her to be the captain of this ship taking all the worry and concerns away from you.
She definitely is the captain and takes control of every situation!
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