RiverJordan

Voice in a void

Show me your heart

 

battle ridden

 

these thoughts regard me not

 

selfless egos clash within

 

storming for milele,

 

visions are seized and left eternal,

 

the day trippers gaze into the nightshade; entrapped by the gloomy nirvana.

 

the flames light themselves,

 

for who wants to peer?.

 

one stare

 

you never come back,

 

 

as were.

Comments2

  • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸

    Wow you craft your muse in superb word choice and phrasing! Milele I would like to look up. Interesting great poem overall. Kudos.

    Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too!

    • RiverJordan

      ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

    • Unsub

      I thoroughly enjoyed this one. The gloomy nirvana! Perfect!

      I won’t end my comment asking you to read my poem as that’s just plain rude!

      Unsub.

      • RiverJordan

        Haha, appreciate the love Unsub



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