Farther and father into the sea the tide is slowly ebbing me
Scales scratch against my knees a color flashes teasing me what kind of fish would show itself so easily?
a hint of lilac crosses my vision as though swimming through space and time without any rhyme
slowly I am pulled into the water as I scream... nothingness fills my lung nothing...nothing indeed
my thoughts are racing my vision blurs what a way to die drowning without water
as I blank out a figure swims in front of me smiling sweetly my last tingling sensation of soft lips upon mine.
You will be mine next time.
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Moozpace (
Offline) - Published: February 23rd, 2020 18:42
- Comment from author about the poem: love can kill you even if it is not lethal.
- Category: Love
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BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening MOOZ ~ I trust you are aware that when down loaded your elegant ODE is printed in Greek ! Fortunately I studied Classics @ School (20 years ago !) so I was able to transliterate your enigmatic ODE !
The tide is pulling you into the SEA and you are accosted
by a Lilac Fish ! You are pulled screaming (Im not surprized !)
into the water ! BUT (pardoxically) you are drowing sans water !
You faint and a figure (human ?) swims in front of you ~ smiles
and then snogs you ! YOU WILL BE MINE NEXT TIME !
Love the last line ~ More Poems Please ~ preferably in English !
MPS is a PROACTIVE site and works by reading & commenting
on each others Poems ! Please visit our site. Angela is my Fiancee.
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA !
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