The better Gems

🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

What's better than gold?
A heart of gold and any golden rule
Thus donot over the mined thing drool.

What's better than pearls?
Any pearls of wisdom
grant the oyster some freedom!

What's better than diamonds
Heavenly Supernovas and stars that dazzle like them
So don't you fret if you can't afford
the earthly underground gem.

What's better than rubies?
Crimson roses and rosy lips
I do and maybe you too already have them!

What's better than emeralds?
Feline eyes glowing in the dark.
Ah Lord! That fluorescent emerald spark!

What's better than silver?
The hope that every cloud has a silver lining
Even miners they don't enjoy the mining.

What's better than amber?
Amber eyes shining like embers.
In God's design variety of eyeball shades
Ah and the licorice eyed maidens and maids!

And whether it be zircon or amethyst
Sapphire or lapis lazuli
Agate, opal or tanzanite
what tis far better
than all these gems put together
is anyone known as 'a gem of a person'.
For instance it's upto you to transcend flesh and blood and be a guiding star for the transient travellers that we are.
The dust that man is famously created from
can really be upgraded to stardust if you are a shining star in God's eyes.
And If you are kind you are a gem of a person in the view of the Creator 

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  • Neville

    a multi-faceted gem of a poem..

    • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

      Thanks soo much for a bright brill comment, ,multifaceted goes well with my poem on various gems and their other literary usages. Best wishes,

    • dusk arising

      Heaven has eyes now? What stuff has been taught to you i#m wondering.

      Other than the last two lines i found this an excellent piece.

      • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

        Hmm I thought I shouldn't repeat God twice in one line , though I have seen heaven used synonymously with God like when poets write, " and heaven heard my cries or heaven saw my plight, it's just being poetic. But I will change it to another name for God, .
        The last line calls any and all kind persons as gem of a person, we need more kind people in the world. Thanks soo much for your thoughts!

        • dusk arising

          I thought it a shame that you brought any religion into the piece because all the values described so well existed long before man invented religion. They are after all facets of humanity.

          • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

            Ah Noh I strongly believe religion existed long before and is what brought values to this planet or we world grope like savage barbarians for longer. Man did not invent religion, it was brought by God as the instruction manual for His creation us. Religion existed ever since humans did, ever since Adam the first man.

            • dusk arising

              Strongly disagree with everything you stated in your last comment but there's no point in arguing about it, we will just have to agree to disagree whilst respecting each others right to hold a different belief/opinion.

              • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

                You may disagree fine I don't enjoy argument. But doesn't mean what I'm saying is wrong . I know what I said to be the truth. Without religion we are purposeless animals and I and many would fall into depression and shicidal thoughts without prayers and theism. True Religion and theism is vital for man, wonder why you think otherwise..without a creator there is no creation. Peace!

                • dusk arising

                  OK so its just me who accepts that it is your right to hold a different belief/opinion.... sadly you don't seem able to accept that i have that right too.
                  Finally you insult me with stating that i don't accept things which i haven't even discussed with you.

                  • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

                    Everybody can think and believe what they like coz we have free will , I can't shove belief down your throat nor should anyone shove disbelief down mine or anyone else's throat. You have right to whatever , never took it away , I just presented the facts I know that disagree with your views . And I totally don't see how I insulted you!!! I pride myself in being of the kindest rational reasonable beings ever. I did not say you didn't accept those things , I just said my view , beliefs and experiences which you can see are rational. You did say yourself that you strongly disagree with sth I said , though you did not explain yourself why and how exactly . Ah just try to be fair pleeez . Are you an atheist?

                    • dusk arising

                      Earlier you said you don't like arguing yet you persist. This would have stopped if only you had been able to accept my comment that we should respect each others right to hold a different belief/opinion. Obviously you can't do that despite writing that you can. You went on to tell me what i think without even bothering to discuss what i think. Duplicity!

                      • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

                        I don\'t like arguing for the sake of arguing. But if I read something which I feel is not factual and true I can\'t help saying the factual view or else it would look I accepted the false view. To say that religion did not exist since humans were created or did not exist before values is false and I can\'t just say nothing to that. I did not tell what you think. I can discuss what you think if u want but you have to bring truths and facts only to the table. We can discuss without attacking and fighting come on.

                        • dusk arising

                          Zaynab your replies and comments are full of contradictions which you seem unable to perceive.

                          • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

                            Hmm unsub, I'm a lady . I agree to anything if you bring proven facts on the table. I don't force my views even when I bring facts and proofs. Anyone can believe whatever they want whether truth or false right. We r free to reject or accept truth, .peace.

                            • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

                              And come on dusk arising, almost all my poems have religious touches and inferences , but you have never picked on me like that on the religious point which I'm very much for all heart and soul for its truth. I don't see any contradictions in what I say , I don't think there are any. 😩I think you get me but are pretending just to just argue.

                              • dusk arising

                                PMSL.... shall we start by asking for proof about certain christian beliefs..... maybe we'll start by asking you the believer for proof that jesus was born on christmas day... and then go on to ask for proof that he was crucified at easter...... Lets see how much you rely upon actual facts.

                                • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

                                  Oh dear poet dusk now you are talking, let\'s discuss peacefully. By the way what\'s PMSL? I actually doubt myself that Jesus was born on Christmas Day ever since many Christians told me and stated that it was actually a pagan sun god birth day that Romans adopted as Jesus birth or something so I\'m with you on that dear friend. And as a Muslim I find no proof that he was crucified at Easter either, coz we Muslims believe someone else was crucified in hisplace, . So I can\'t give you facts on things I don\'t believe coz honestly there aren\'t any. Now you just take care and go enjoy your life , have fun and peace. 😇

                                  • dusk arising

                                    Now i understand your duplicity.

















                                    • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

                                      Hmmm???? What duplicity where?? I never said Jesus was born on Christmas. Gosh you are just pulling my leg I know.

                                      • dusk arising

                                        Do you mean what they call in plain English 'taking the piss?'

                                        • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

                                          Blah 😜I don't know what's taking the piss means.
                                          And unsub pms means post menstrual syndrome. I'm young not yet there so 😜

                                          • dusk arising

                                            It occurs to me that you are having problems understanding current English language usage. This perhaps begins to explain further why your actions and words don't match up.

                                            • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

                                              Heyy though I might not know all English slang but even westerners and Englishman have praised my English so don't undermine my English so. You really don't say how my actions and words don't match up, wait a minute what actions? I'm merely writing . Ok go get a chill pill and relax...

                                              • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

                                                And hey unsub I googled pms and it yields only the same as I said before so stop kidding.

                                                • dusk arising

                                                  So you dont understand the the act of writing is an action? I repeat, you understanding of current english language usage is in doubt.

                                                  • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

                                                    Gosh very sorry I must have missed out reading the L. My bad. Let me check that out. PMSL.

                                                    • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

                                                      Hello dusk , writing is an action ok ok fine Noh big deal I can accept that.

                                                      • dusk arising

                                                        OK Unsub, i'll bring the popcorn

                                                        • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

                                                          There was nothing wrong with Bill's poem , it was a lament for which I merely had suggestions.
                                                          And unsub fine I can debate with any if I didn't travel tomorrow. And why sour grapes and rotten juice which is wine, but rather sherbet for me . Cheers!!!

                                                          • dusk arising

                                                            More tea vicar?

                                                            • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

                                                              Was that to me? Anyway I bring religion to the table if someone says anything against it that is untrue. Besides my poems all have a religious touch usually.

                                                              • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

                                                                Ok ok maybe you could write the names when addressing , coz you are writing under my poem. Chill! Bye!

                                                                • dusk arising

                                                                  To Unsub (to avoid confusion and in fear of raising paranoia) ho ho ho.

                                                                • Saxon Crow

                                                                  Awesome poem. I love that you focus on the true riches in life from many difgerent perspectives. Brilliant poem!

                                                                • Fay Slimm.

                                                                  A beautiful string of reasons for shining like gems while we have life and breath. This poetic jewel is very inspiring - It goes now into my favourites and thank you for sharing it.

                                                                • ANGELA & BRIAN

                                                                  HI FRIEND ~ BRIAN HERE ! I love every word of your exquisite Poem. I have studied Geology and I love Gemstones. We teach Gemology @ College and it is a wonderful subject. They are beautiful in their rough state and even more beautiful when they are cut & polished ~ just as people are. I have a collection of semi-precious gemstones which I use to give talks to Seniors (60+). Every Gemstone you mention has its own *Quality & Mystique*. They all have their own application in Jewelry & Religion. I like the way you mention the Spiritual Aspect of Gemstones in your elegant *ODE to GEMSTONES*. Many of them are mentioned in our Holy Book the BIBLE. Each of us are like *Gemstones* and we can be honed & polished ~ as your poem suggests ~ and fitted for Gods Service. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ We have saved it as a Fave ~ AMEN !

                                                                  Blessings & Peace & Joy
                                                                  Love BRIAN & ANGELA
                                                                  💛🤍🧡💚💙💜🤎

                                                                  • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

                                                                    Hey you adorable couple Brian and Angela, thanks soo much and warmest regards, your comment and thoughts are sparkling as pearls of wisdom themselves, very interesting what you say, yes gems are a great creation of God too and yes we should try to polish ourselves for our own betterment yeahh. My all admiration for your words. Blessings and best wishes.

                                                                  • MendedFences27

                                                                    There's a lot of beauty in this poem: Comparisons that are heart-felt, the value of human consideration over sparkling gems, and the transient nature of mankind.
                                                                    However, let me say this knowing I and everyone else is guilty of this, your poem would be all the more powerful if reduced down to its basic elements. Consider this: just the first two lines of each stanza, and even those somewhat condensed, and the final stanza cut to just one line.
                                                                    Although the rest are beautiful words they do not add to what you were trying to achieve.
                                                                    A beautiful poem none the less but more powerful if cut to the quick. - Phil A.

                                                                    • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

                                                                      Ah yes lengthy volume is my weakness, but for clarity and message I have to go to some lengths lol pun intended, I mean I have to say some related things, I didn't actually digress for instance kindness makes a person a gem in God's eyes so all related right. I should try to edit and shorten the lines in future though. Thanks ever so much for your fine comment and great constructive criticism. Cheers !

                                                                    • Nemo

                                                                      And through kindness hearts are owned, very well written 🌹

                                                                    • Seek

                                                                      What a gem of a poem, S. Zaynab. Hongera! You do such a marvellous job of replacing those "precious" metals that many of us worship, with precious qualities most should aspire to. Thoroughly enjoyed this and thank you for sharing.

                                                                      • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

                                                                        Aw thanks soo much for such bright wise thoughts on my poem, and thanks for the Kiswahili congrats, not my mother tongue as is Urdu but I have learnt it now . Best wishes!

                                                                      • xeina

                                                                        What a gem of a poem this is. Very heartfelt and well-written.

                                                                      • Gino

                                                                        This is a great write my friend, brilliant work!

                                                                      • Jon Nakapalau

                                                                        Wow! Love the many 'cuts' of this poem!

                                                                      • Gary Edward Geraci

                                                                        The series of questioning aptly and fittingly resolves in the last line of this piece: the Creator. The Creator is infinitely better than even the most beautiful gem known as Miss Universe (and don't we scour the world looking for her most every year?) When I look at my Lord I look at the pinnacle; the apex of ALL that IS (beautiful). Enjoyed reading and contemplating beauty SZK.

                                                                      • FineB

                                                                        Hello S.zaynab,

                                                                        A beautiful poem with sparkling gems of wisdom.

                                                                        Keep writing and safe & healthy during these difficult times.
                                                                        FineB

                                                                        • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

                                                                          My warmest thanks for your lovely nice comment! Do take care and stay safe and write more poems with your fine pen.. ☺️🌷

                                                                        • rrodriguez

                                                                          Awesome! Beautiful! I enjoy your descriptions so much. Great work!

                                                                          • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

                                                                            Thanks soo much for your super fine comment. Means a lot coming from a great poet like you. Stay safe , best wishes!

                                                                          • L. B. Mek

                                                                            wonderfully written, imbued with so much passion and packed with creative metaphors

                                                                          • Caring dove

                                                                            I like this poem 🙂nice words !



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