Almost forgot how to feel so rare now because I sense something but it's not real.
your life is media pictures that show all of you except the real you.
You wish to be better wish to know what authenticity is.
cause someone is gone who actually wanted to talk but now they're lost.
you don't know how to handle it you could've talked now you hate yourself who's willing to forgive.
Love me love someone say they love me like my picture comment watch my life instead of learning to live.
Follow me don't stalk god forgive we actually talk.
look and don't touch look here is a picture of my body I nasty as fuck I like rough.
At least on camera, talk to me give me attention but I know who I want it ain't you.
but look at me do this do you think she can do it like this too.
I have a significant other but I need you but I don't wanna see you give me everything you have.
take a look how much money? I'm going to leave this person who gave me what they have but it's not enough I don't feel shit.
Get me more followers and likes I don't need to work aren't you rich?
I'm lost between the real world and my media it's never said what it does to ya.
people die out here please don't let me I'll pose like every other bitch at here please don't forget me.
You don't live life you watch someone do it for you.
leave me alone or be genuine.
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Dakota (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 1st, 2020 04:56
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Comments2
Lack of and inappropriately placed punctuation has left me confuse about this piece. Use of commas would have helped i think. Placing question marks in strange places e.g. "take a look how much money?" just led to several re-reads in a failed attempt to understand.
Gave up trying to make sense of this thinking it is probably just a rant written in the heat of the moment.
Thank you for reading have a good one 😁
This was very different..it takes on a journey in a way...i liked the parts about how your significant other lives in cy er space instead ifin the real world..social media addicts are not relation ship worthy if u ask me...they live in a fantasy land which can be extremely detrimental in a relationship and usually ends up being so
Thank you 🙏🏽 for reading and yes I totally agree
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