Jon Nakapalau

i think the real question

is not when you run out of

luck but if you can run faster
than unluck as you try to take

all the barbwire hurdles as the
sneaky rat with the starting pistol

keeps suppressive firing your way. 


  • Claudelle DeLuna

    Great piece you crafted here Jon
    & relatable

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