See that graze
On my arm
You put it there
Or did I?
And now
Blood runs
My blood
Dark and dirty
Like a poison
Promising
See that empty stare
In my eyes
You put it there
Or did I?
And now
Visions terrify
My hurt
Self inflicted
Like an inevitability
Unending
See that need
In my chest
You put it there
Or did I?
And now
Death comes
My death
Ugly and pointless
Like a disease
Living
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Author:
sylviasearcher (
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- Comment from author about the poem: And so my words fall like a silence now
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Comments1
Wow my first read in a while and o what a punch, your words sit with my soul in the empty pit of my stomach.
Was it them or me, you or I
Either way we all have to live them die...
Sorry... not sure where that came from but it was all done in the moment after reading your vibe
Keep up the write
See you on the other side 😉
Thanks as always Dan for reading my work, feeling it and encouraging me
You is raw, real and awesome! People find that pops a bubble, this is now self projection.. Never forget we can't be amazing at every thing but pleasing ourselves is top of the list, that and respect 😉
Have a great day!
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