Some words bring tension

Poetic Dan



I am going to mention that word, you may need to hold on to your seat, if your standing or walking, don't let all the blood go to your brain

 

Religion! Wait that's not just it but the word "God" that comes with it or of it could I say.

 

I don't know much but I know this, my experiences are mine and over time a gift!

 

No other had each one that I did, this knowledge of timeless mistakes, our own emotional wave to deal with.

 

Words passed down are like markings on a map, actions in the moments are the cause of the ripple affect!

 

For I know an apple feeds me because I held it in my hand, I've felt the power of vibration because of anothers eye glare.

 

All I know is from happenings, not a faith or belief that they would. You can call me old school but until I've been there and done it or feel it so.

 

My reality is my own!

 

I am sure this is all mind games we play, to save our own soul. I follow no word but my own, unless we match for a moment

 

To then part ways
At the end of the day
We travel home alone
But together we roam

 

 

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 12th, 2020 02:23
  • Comment from author about the poem: After reading some post yesterday and my own reality of not having the same view as most, I had to get theses words out! The video I add is a 7 month old that is not taking no for an answer and in my world I forgot everything people say and live in the moments of action... No history, no belief, only trying to live in the beauty of now.....keep up the write! Much peace and respect
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  • Laura🌻

    Dan,

    ...Suum Cuique...
    to each his own!

    A great write that makes perfect sense!

    I enjoyed the video!
    Thank you for sharing!

    ~Laura~🌻

    • Poetic Dan

      Always a pleasure and glad my ramblings are not that crazy... Or maybe you are just as mad as me 😉

      See you for tea, just follow the rabbit. Your always on time!

      • Laura🌻

        🤗

      • dusk arising

        I always enjoy your vids mate and this one was a pleasure.
        Yep, religion or ones faith or that god thing. Huge subject but i find it sickening to read the preaching 'holier than thou' crap rolled out by so many. And what is so funny is that most of them belong to different 'strains' of the same religion who have fallen out with each other and set up their own church. He he he they can't even agree among themselves.

        • Poetic Dan

          Wicked as I did think of you when posting the vid buddy!

          Yeah, it's a mind field. Now what you've said has got me started again as the same goes for training a dog or bring up children, my point is, you don't have to preach, just do!

          The only reason we have to keep passing words on is because hardly anyone is practicing what they preach, in any subject!

          Anyway that's enough of that vibe, need to stay relaxed. Just found out I many have damage to nerves in me leg, (my skin feels on fire, although nothing is there) from my back but time will tell.

          Not sure on the drug that gave me, but I'll give it go 😉

          • dusk arising

            So sorry to read about your leg Dan. You are going to have to get another skateboard but with BIGGER wheels and set those dogs up like a team of huskies to tow you around for your doggy exercise videos. Now there's a project for you.... and i want to see the videos even the ones where the wheels come off and six dogs are dragging you along on your chest.

          • anonymousblue

            You sound like an angrier Walt Whitman in this poem, which is very interesting and fresh. Well done.

            • Poetic Dan

              Wow, thank you kindly. I've been Breaking Bad for as long as I can remember!

              Always appreciate your time

              Much peace and respect

            • Saxon Crow

              Dan you're a poet warrior. Shout it loud my friend.... and I won't mentione the J word!

              • Poetic Dan

                Ha ha ha, not unless you are passing it to the left my friend!

                The pen is mightier than the sword, i wrote one on warriors need a few years ago!
                I'll be leaving my mark, I can promise you this!
                I'm the walking dead with a heart!

                Thank for the inspiration and laughter

                Much peace and respect

              • Neville

                Live and let live... makes sense to me

                another lovely video Dan .. go well and stay safe...

                • Poetic Dan

                  Yeah, rock on my friend!

                  Life is for just that, need to remind myself more often lol!

                  Always appreciate your time!



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