If to exist
Was a star in my sky
Would i gaze it
Stirring through my shine
If to exist
Was to own a light
Would i rover
A glow in them sights
If to exist
Was a wind carrying signs
Would i whisk it over
A breath they say is mine
If to exist
Is to grace a sigh
Should i pour in shelter
Or be devoid of sky ?
~ savvy
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Author:
Savvy_walia (
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- Comment from author about the poem: this poem is an excerpt from a book i've started writing today titled 'Existence'
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BRSIAN HERE ~ Good Evening *SW* welcome to MPS ~ it is a proactive site and opperates by reading & commenting on each others Poems ~ OK ! Thans for your first Poem & success with your BOOK !
You pose a QUESTION *If to Exist* and suggest four possibilities.
1. A star in the sky ~ ASTRAL
2. To own a light ~ LUMINOUS
3. A wind crrying signs ~ EPHEMERAL
4. To grace a sigh ~ EMOTIONAL
Im 36 so in my limited experience of Life I have been all these things Astral - Luminous - Ephemeral (transient) & Emotional but never all simultaniously ~ Ive only been married Five days so I have much to learn. However it is how I have coped with these four States that has increased my Maturity and abled me to cope with a PANDEMIC like CORVID 19 ~ How are you coping ?
Please check our site ~ thanks You
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA !
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