the way you captivated me
poured heart and soul
day and night into this
piece
to present to you
little did I understand of timing
just when the work was through
you up and flew
away, leaving me empty
little to say except
“new exhibit, broken heart on display”
what exquisite brushstrokes of pain
captive the audience in this museum of the same lame, lost, lonesome
name “Heartbreak”, what even does that mean?
breakage implies fixability
but for me it’s disability
can shove the pieces into the semblance of a shape, but it just ain’t the same
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jakesevern (
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- Category: Love
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Comments2
It will never be the same, but it will be mended by you and time. Many hearts are broken many times (i know from bitter experience) and with time your heart will reside within a defense of self love where any suitor will have to prove their worth to get close to it.
"What doesn't kill you makes you stronger".
Enjoyed the flow of your piece today and the way you present questions within it.
Thank you dusk arising!!
Well said, I like 'breakage implies fixability', but I guess if there are too many pieces even crazy glue won't help!
haha perfect analogy - “crazy glue”
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