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Gwreichionen

You smile, I melt, I speak, you yearn

You touch, I quiver, I kiss, you’re mine

 

Together we set the world alight

Banishing shadows from the night

Our eyes burn with an orange glow

Forever one, today & tomorrow

 

Into your arms you invite me

With your lips you delight me

But it’s your spark that ignites me

 

In the dark you excite me

In your light you entice me

But it’s your spark that ignites me

 

I smile, you melt, you speak, I yearn

I touch, you quiver, you kiss, I’m yours

 

My love for you burns like fire

Hot flames engulf my desire

Inside I rage

This feeling won’t end ‘til my funeral pyre

 

Together we set this world alight

Banning darkness from the night

Our eyes burn with a fiery glow

Forever one, today & tomorrow

 

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  • Laura

    Unsub,

    Whoa...

    That spark has set this page on fire!πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯
    Kudos to your perfect memory!
    You’ve remembered my other lifetime before that β€˜funeral pyre’ with such passion!
    Bravo πŸ‘πŸ» and thank you for the memories!❀️

    Laura

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      Laura,

      thought you'd appreciate this poem.

      Just thought it time for a break from the misery & self-loathing poetry I write.

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      • Laura

        You thought correctly...
        again!πŸ˜‰

      • The Uneducated O.A.P

        I suggested an early night to the wife, I said her light enticed me,she replied ,I doubt it my batterys flat. Great words Unsub, keep em coming, Bill

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          Bill,

          LOL!

          Thanks for dropping by to read & comment my friend,

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        • dusk arising

          Ello ello whats got hold of you then? Where's all the doom and gloom? What have you found in lockdown?

          This is by far to joyous and loving compared to your usual suicide notes.

          Apart from all that. this is bloody god stuff. You should post more in this ilk.

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            Dusky,

            I try not to be a one-trick pony. Doom & gloom is fine but sometimes you have to step away & turn on the light.

            I have a book of handwritten love poems for Carys. About 110 at the moment. We occassionally get the book out & I read them to her. The problem now is an evening of passion takes three hours of reading before I even get my pants off!! LOL!

            Thanks for your positive vibes,

            regards

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          • MendedFences27

            A heartfelt expression of love and desire. Surely the fire is burning brightly, and it seems forever it will. That orange glow might be something to be concerned about, maybe too much screen time because of Covid-19?
            I liked the sound of dedication in this poem. Until your"funeral pyre" sounds like a promise. Eternal passion is what we all desire. When you find it , keep it. - Phil A.

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              Phil,

              appreciate you taking time out to read & comment.

              My partner Carys loves this particular piece so I thought I should share it (with her permission).

              She is Welsh & is teaching me the language so I thought I should attempt a poem at least with a Welsh title.

              Thanks again,

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            • Goldfinch60

              Unsub,

              I HAVE WON - YOU HAVE SEEN THE LIGHT!!

              What a wonderful gathering of words you have given us to day showing the love that is within you.
              This is so good it will have to go into favourites - you have quite a collection in there.

              Andy

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                Andy,

                indeed it is finally game over. Your persistence was key (to steal a catchphrase neither of us believe in) & I have been converted from the dark into the light...well until night time that is!

                Thanks for the favourite addition.

                regards

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              • orchidee

                I tried this, but I went up in a puff of smoke. I knew it would be too 'hot' for me! lol.

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                  orchi,

                  you're not supposed to set yourself alight - cold shower for you!

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                  • orchidee

                    And Fido at the ready, with those buckets of cold water to chuck on me. I'm safe from any 'ardour' with him around!

                  • ANGELA & BRIAN

                    ANGELA HERE ~ Good Morning Bill just catching up on Yesterdays crop of MPS ! Its not often we get a TITILE in WELSH (SPARKS ~ seems approppriate - love the visual !) on MSN ! Or a passionate LOVE ODE from UNSUB we like it ! It speaks of exciting (sparky) & eternal LOVE that we all want to eperience - now & always. WE are newly married - I*ll let you know in 50 years time how it pans out ! Thanks for sharing your loving side ! Please check UMBRELLA MAN & our latest FUSION ~ Thanks A & B !

                    Love & Peace & Joy to You all
                    Angela & Brian & Smokey Cat !

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                      A&B,

                      "Good Morning Bill" - appreciate your attention to detail!

                      Well I live in Wales, am learning Welsh & Carys is Welsh so it made sense to have a Welsh word in my poetry collection. Pointless writing the whole poem in Welsh as that would appeal to about zero readers!

                      I have asked you before to not advertise your own poetry or latest fusion on my page.

                      Thanks for stopping by,

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                      • ANGELA & BRIAN

                        Good Morning UNSUB (sorry I got you confused with UAOP - Bill) Angela here - Thanks for your reply. I apoloise for the ADVERT - never again - OK ! Welsh is a beautiful language (The Language of Heaven) and when we visit Wales we learn the Hymns - phonetically - so we can join in the Singing ! When we post HAIKU in Spanish we always include a Translation. You could do the same with WELSH. It is pity the English are so Linguaphobic !

                        Blessings & Peace to You & Carys
                        Love Angela & Brian πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

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                      • peto

                        Bendigedig writing
                        Can see the spark between you and your cariad
                        Hwyl an nawr

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                          peto,

                          appreciate the Welsh response my friend.

                          Regards

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                        • sylviasearcher

                          Awww unsub, you have a very lucky lady. That melted even my icy heart!

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                            sylvia,

                            it melted your icy heart? IMPOSSIBLE! LOL!

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                            • sylviasearcher

                              True...



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