I knew you were out there; but knew not where
I stood upon the sand; but didn’t see your outstretched hand
The beach I did explore; but never saw you come ashore
But now I’ve found you; I shan’t let go
Thank the moon & stars that shine on us below
I wish you’d been my first love; my first crush
I wish you’d been my first dance & I wish you’d been my first romance…
…but from this day you’ll always be
My first, my last, forever & for all eternity
I wish you’d been my first girl; my first date
I wish you’d been my first kiss & I wish you’d been my first caress…
…but from this day you’ll always be
My first, my last, forever & for all eternity
My first love, my first ever crush
My first embrace, my first ever taste
My first dance, my first ever romance
My first kiss, my first ever caress
I so wish you’d been my first
I knew you were out there; but knew not where
I stood upon the sand; but didn’t see your outstretched hand
The beach I did explore; but never saw you come ashore
But now I’ve found you; I shan’t let go
Thank the moon & stars that shine on us below…
…& from this moment you’ll always be
My first, my last, forever & for all eternity
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A dreamy and delightful write.
Very much to my liking!
Fulfilled are those who find
the love of their life.
I truly believe
the best is for last...
and I believe you have found it❣️
Hooray for the power of love!💞😄
As always...
Laura🌻
Laura,
thanks for the positive vibes!
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Filled with tender romance this read will flutter all readers' hearts -- first and last love is rare and so beautiful.
Fay,
appreciate you taking time to read & comment,
regards
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Great lyrics for a meaningful love song later in life. Words which will touch lovers hearts.
dusky,
appreciate the visit my friend,
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GOOD EVENING UNSUB - Angela here - Thanks for sharing a very touching love Poem. We were born in the 1980s and in the 21st C young people have had opportunities to travel go to Uni live apart from their parents so we had oportunity to fall in & out of Love and seldom maried our FIRST LOVE ! The message of your Poem is that wben we meet the right Person - HE / SHE becomes (in essence) our First Love ! Brian & I had many Loves but when we met (I was 28 & Brian 33) it was *fatal attraction* and (in essence) we really fell in Love for the First Time. We can empathise with your lyrical ode. WE have missed your Poems.
Love - Peace - Joy
Angela & Brian 💛💛
Angela,
thanks for the read & comment. A little surprised by your sentence "we have missed your poems". I haven't been anywhere & am regularly posting?
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Thanks for your reply UNSUB It just seemed the there were 3 or 4 days without an UNSUB POEM. Of course none of us Post every day!
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🤍💙
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A wonderful romantic write taking you into the light that you knew was always there.
"Your first, your last, forever & for all eternity"
Eternity eh? Great.
Andy
Andy,
light-infused just for you!!
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