Moyu Aoki

untitled no.3

I stood in the evening calm.

On the beach there were myriad footprints.

Comments3

  • Neville

    although very much enjoyed at face value.. I am sure this is far cleverer than many might imagine... top marks from me regardless...

    Neville

    • Moyu Aoki

      I'm glad you feel that way.

      I'd like to try to describe the large landscape and atmosphere in just a few words.

      • Neville


        I share that passion ...

      • ANGELA & BRIAN

        Good Morning MOYU ! Thank you for a very calming (7 3 7) triplet on a Monday Morning. So few words ~ so much wisdom !

        Peace & Joy & Love
        Angela & Brian 💛💛💛

      • dusk arising

        many look, few see.



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