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  • orchidee

    Best poem ever! lol.

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      orchi,

      I have to agree with you that this is probably the best poem ever. It's certainly one of my best!

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    • ANGELA & BRIAN

      ANGELA HERE ~ Gracias UNSUB for an elegant posting of what w e call in Spanish *Una Poema sin Parablas* The Orientals call them NONCU which is also a term in SNOOKER which is Brians fave indoor sport. Because our cars are waterproof we have a Demi-snooker Table in the Garage. We will write a *Sin Parablas* on COVID 19 ~ when it has been de-virusised !

      Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
      Love Angela - Brian - Smokey 🧡🤍💙

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        A&B,

        I am disappointed you failed to highlight my rhyming scheme, word-play, structure, delivery & potent message! LOL!

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      • RiverJordan

        So many or so little words look to unsheathe. I feel you.

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          RJ,

          glad you feel this, it took a few drafts to get it exactly as I wanted.

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        • dusk arising

          When you've nowt to say...

          . ..... say nowt

          . innit

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            Dusky,

            I knew you'd really get to grips with this challenging theme & was able to see the underlining message held just beneath the surface of my scathing words.

            LOL!

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          • Michael Edwards

            Allm I can add to this fine write is .............................

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              ME,

              Oh I know how fine this one is, I've never been prouder of my work as I am with this masterpiece!

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            • Goldfinch60

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              ..--..--?

              Andy

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                Andy,

                ..--..--?

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                ps. I must thank you for your support in helping me find the confidence to post such a difficult subject matter. LOL!

              • Evergreen

                Very clever Unsub. Your intelligence and creativity made me chuckle.

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                  Evergreen,

                  one does try to mix it up & find new topics to write about. This thought-provoking piece has clearly made an impression on you & will no doubt make you re-think your life's choices! LOL!

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                • TWENTY3

                  only you could write a poem of nothing and get 8+ comments and favourites when the poet before you who wrote a long poem about the same topic get next to nothing. You are a hero.

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                    23

                    10 comments & 4 favs for writing absolutely nothing! I’ve mastered this poetry thing! Lol!

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                  • The Uneducated O.A.P

                    My eye test must be overdue, can't find the bloody poem! Lol

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                      Bill,

                      Should have gone to spec savers.

                      Oh hang on, I can’t find anything either!

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