As I tell my neices and nephews,
"Jaminel... Jakiah... Juliana... Samson:
You must always remember Jesus.
When you are older,
there will be a time,
when you may have a problem,
and daddy, mommy, uncle, grammy,
pop-pop, or aunty Mel won't be there,
and the only one,
whom you will be able to call on -
the only one who will be there,
will be Jesus.
So remember to always love Jesus,
because He will always,
be there for you".
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Author:
Dion P. Crown (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Ask, and it shall be given to you; seek, and you will find; knock, and it will be opened to you. - Matthew 7:7 esv - Persistence is key
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I think you mean God , we should learn to remember God since childhood yes so I liked this thinking as I did of God the father as I believe in Jesus as only a prophet of God like Adam. The poem is superb. Kudos!
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
Adam was not a prophet, and actually, I do mean Jesus. Jesus is so much more than a prophet. He is the son of God who died for the world's sins. It is because of Jesus that we have the opportunity to go to Heaven when we eventually die.
I am glad that you enjoyed this piece. I wrote it in regards to my neices and nephews whom I love very much.
Jesus saves.
Persistence is key
We believe Adam was God's messenger very same to Jesus who we believe was just a prophet. We don't believe in crucifiction of Jesus. I believe we go to heaven by God's grace and mercy and if we follow the commandments given to the prophets that Jesus also asked to follow. Anyway let's just agree to differ in religion, no need to argue further unless you are interested in knowing more of what I strongly believe as true religion today. Cheers.
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