Love is not splendid

Trenz Pruca

 

Love is not splendid
At best
it is
a blister on your foot
or an empty room.

  • Author: Trenz Pruca (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 1st, 2020 12:51
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments2

  • L. B. Mek

    alarmingly those blisters manifest during swimming practise and that empty room exists somewhere deep within, meaning that hollowness is prominent even when busily surrounded by smiling faces,
    a great gem you've penned

  • Lorna

    That's "at worst" Trenz - not at best! But you have captured at worst!

    • Trenz Pruca

      I guess it depends on ones experiences. Than you...



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