Trenched.

Fay Slimm.

 

Trenched.

 

The sear of midday's acid heat

paled black mud as guns' battle fervour

cracked ruts in trenched earth.

 

Nothing stirred but eddies of smoke

that smote burnt lips while choking breath

shuddered as life ebbed.

 

The unnumbered lists of lined names 

depict how massive was sacrifice

when sanity died. 

 

War pins no elation on those

who would have won global peace had

not greed beat compassion.

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 8th, 2020 02:58
  • Comment from author about the poem: LEST WE FORGET.................
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  • Neville


    said just as it was then, and as it needs to be said .. over and over and always ...

    • Fay Slimm.

      Agree with your comment wholeheartedly Nev, - - the travesty still speaks to us - - - lest we forget.......................x

    • Lorna

      Never will they learn....... someone always making a profit behind it all.... I despair........

    • Doggerel Dave

      That's great Fay - up there with A.D. Hope's 'Inscription for War'.
      Good for you.

    • orchidee

      Good write Fay.

    • dusk arising

      As one civilisation begins to learn, healing the wounds of conflict bourne wisdom ... so another rises beneath a despot bent upon accumulation of whatever it takes to sate it's need for power.
      Blood flows and wisdom again rises too late from the bloodbath only to be shortlived.

      And so we approach the saddest month of rememberance.... but with what new resolution.... with what wisdom that will make a change....

    • ron parrish aka wordman

      war brings the big money,evil men cause wars



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