The pond with the swans is cold and quiet
but the swans are gone;
leaves once lush and green
rustle now in the north wind brown, burgundy, gold
a sky pressing down allowing no sunlight
but a few stray beams at the end of the day
shortened by the tilt of the Earth toward winter
so it seems lifeless and sterile, unwelcoming
affronting the visitor with a breeze too cold for beaches
I pull my coat close around me, hunching down
the sun lowers, the air turns violet and dim
all memory of love, of warmth, of pleasure, is locked away
for the siege; I shall not be here again,
shall not witness the creeping encroachment of winter
the shuttered windows
the bare trees
the bleak days
the solitary crow winging over the water, silent and cold
I am the water, silent and cold
but no one knows the depths
not even the swans
Copyright 2010 by Margery Larch
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Author:
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- Published: October 19th, 2020 11:30
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ANGELA HERE (I share site with My Husband - of Six Months - Brian). Good afternoon ZINNIA (love your name & logo) welcome to MPS. It is a proactive site - it operates by reading & commenting on each others Poems ~ OK. Please visit our Site ~ Thanks !
Love your first Poem you have set a high Standard (which encourages us All !) both in Structure & Subject. Interesting *Free Verse* and easy to recite ~ We are Performance Poets. We have visited Maine & New England in the Fall ~ AWESOME ~ I guess you desribe it as it is NOW ?
In Stanzas 1--3 ~ Love your description of the Pond ~ makes me feel like I am there experiencing the elements. At the end of S 3. and in S 4. you are describing the scene from your viewpoint ?
In S 5. there is a sudden switch and you write as the water ! Very interesting SWITCH ! Thanks for sharing ~ more Poems Please ~ Thanks A & B !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !
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