Changing.
And the day dawned
when he doffed his thick overcoat
and set off to meet her alluring invite.
Changing however
her mind-set she fell to preparing
surprises to scare ultra-elusive guys.
She nailed up smiles
and blocked entrance usage to what
was duly considered as time wasters.
If often opened, doors
left ajar can suddenly swing inward
and if feeling unhinged close up again.
He knocked and naked
with confusion at finding love locked
by guilty regret, quickly he crept away.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Playing with metaphoric thoughts on "too little too often" and its results................ hope you enjoy.
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Comments3
Good write Fay.
Thank you Orchi.
some folk'll stop at nowt just to get a bit o what they fancy ........... me.. well I just got a thing about alluring invites ....
on second thoughts though, those bloomin doors when left purposefully ajar do have a habit of swinging back and slamming shut
... Some of us guys just never learn .. do we 🙂
there is absolutely nothing about this page that I dont like.. and I mean like a lot...
Neville
And I thank you a lot for liking my playing with metaphor and imagery in this piece on "too little too often" dear friend - - the picture added its own wordless telling of likely results - -- methinks you 'll agree that doors left ajar should be entered gently ............. x
I concur .................... x
I guess the safest approach for ones self is to be self assured and follow your instincts - so long as you are prepared to be wrong. If one is not self assured then you won't understand that door slam.
Of course if the fella is as thick as a brick then he'll probably be deaf as a post from all those slamming doors.
Ah - - Some wise advice in this fine comment my friend - thank you immensely for your in-put to Changing.
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