love is a pose of power
power is a pose of power
power poses power
love poses love
a pose of thinking is a pose of power
a pose of thinking is a pose of love
thinking is a pose of thinking
thinking is a pose of memory
memory poses memory
thinking poses thinking
memory is a pose of power
memory is a pose of love
memory is a pose of memory
love escape love
love escape a pose of love
love poses its escape
escape poses love
escape poses escape to its love
thinking escape thinking
power escape power
power poses love
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Author:
lucifer very very very 1st (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 9th, 2020 15:52
- Comment from author about the poem: my writing is called philosophical writing. i only uses middle ages words,words liked gracious,extravaganza,etc… this poem is about a thinking is a thinking of pose,power,and love. i don’t add capitalization’s on my writing.
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Congratulations, you're getting worse. You're so vain is the correct spelling and grammar by the way.
thank you for the time of day for your review,dusk arising! "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
lucifer very very very 1st
I'd give it up, DA. I don't think you'll get through and so the other option is to go round: something I'm just beginning to learn in relation to several 'poets' who regularly inflict their splatter here.
- Advice from a novice just learning the ropes.
Dave
thank you for the time of day for your review,dave! "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
lucifer very very very 1st
thank you for the time of day for your whatever, lvvv1.
That's OK, as your unique style - no capitals. We may have to be more formal and grammatical in the world of work, etc. But here there is poetic licence.
Someone named Susan spells their name Su3an, and I've come across Su7an too.
thank you for the time of day for your review,orchidee! "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
lucifer very very very 1st
Wasted your time and energy, didn't you orchidee?
As u can see from the replies, he has a limited vocabulary and communicates like a broken toy.
Possibly has some parts missing.
Hey mate (lvvv1 )
I want to get something sorted here.
Let me just mention a little about me:
I’m no wordsmith, however I can assemble sentences in a way which makes sense to most people. So you could say I’m reasonably good at it. Known as communication, I think I’d get a pass mark anyway. I feel comfortable at MPS because I occasionally get a good response.
However there’s many things through experience I know I’m not good at. These could include painter, sculptor, bus driver, the list goes on. And there are many activities I’d never try – for example, surfboard rider or mountaineer. Those last two because I have no sense of balance and with no manual dexterity or sense of heights I’d have killed myself long ago. I’ve abandoned many attempts at something different over a long life because it made no sense and because I would have just been an object of ridicule if I had continued.
So here, in your case, where are you? Frankly you demonstrate no facility for the English language, you endure much criticism here over that, which cannot be good for your self esteem and yet you remain. Why? I’m hoping you are not an intransigent masochist, but a seeker of satisfaction and fulfillment in life... Give it a go, get out there. Experiment, explore many other activities and leave the environment of MPS , which must be toxic for you, alone.
Take extremely good care of yourself, Dave
He probably just thinks you are addressing him as Dave.
Had u noticed he only ever read 7 poems on here and never commented on any - all details shown in his profile.
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