Stretched, raked, sleek machine
rumbling like a caged beast with
gasoline perfume
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Author:
Goddess of the Mist (
Offline) - Published: November 12th, 2020 23:35
- Category: Haiku
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Stretched, raked, sleek machine
rumbling like a caged beast with
gasoline perfume
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Comments3
is these your take on the antithesis of a Nature Haiku? lol
fun read
Hahaha hadn't thought of it that way but now that you say that...! Glad you enjoyed it😉
Am so glad I came across your Haiku. Incredible picture, beautiful words!
I'm so glad you liked this, and thanks for letting me know!
I've known a few gals with a hint of petrol in their hair but never put "gasoline perfume" together. Without the picture, this sounds like one of them!
"Gasoline perfume" lol. Bon mot!
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