random thoughts inspired on walks experiencing life through five senses

Jerry Reynolds

frostbitten
cherry trees once full
of blossoms

  • Author: Jerry Reynolds (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 2nd, 2020 11:01
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  • L. B. Mek

    bright petals
    glistening eager
    windswept glum,
    a good read, thanks for inspiring my scribble, my first ever Lune (assuming I'm not mistaken)

    • Jerry Reynolds

      I am not qualified to critique. The images are clear and to me a very positive thing. You might want to do some research on the Lune structure; I am for sure thanks for bringing it up.
      https://www.writersdigest.com/write-better-poetry/poetic-form-lune

    • RDS

      A great little gem Jerry. I too just researched a lune (thanks L. B.). This is as structurally pleasing as a cherry tree from bark to limb.
      J

    • Jerry Reynolds

      Have been somewhat perplexed with really nice "Run-ons." Just write them when they are felt and edit them into a Haiku or Senryu later often loosing something in the process. The Lune has exposed a new toy to play with. Shout out to L.B.



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