Metal Sadness

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Steel doors
Slammed in my face
Golden ring
smashing a vase

Diamond and Ruby
Only stones
Silver Dollar
All alone

Bronze medal
Still came in last
Brain is empty
The void is vast

Copper wire
Hanging there
Giving up
Tip the chair

  • Author: Stained Creativity (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 3rd, 2020 18:44
  • Comment from author about the poem: My friend said "mental sadness" in a conversation about poems and I tried to repeat it back to her and accidentally said "metal sadness" so then I took her challenge to write a poem called metal sadness in a minute. This is the result...
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 28
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