Maxine Smith

An idea of love

 

To be seen

As first violet flowers of spring

 

To be heard

As Robins and BackBirds chime and sing

 

To be touched

As the sun radiates over my skin

 

To be devoured

To play upon the edge of sin

Comments8

  • Goldfinch60

    To be loved
    As the words flow over the page

    Andy

    • Maxine Smith

      Thank you Andy, appreciate the read.

    • Neville


      This is the perfect introduction to a brand new day............. absolutely my cuppa tea............... N

      • Maxine Smith

        I’m glad you liked.

        And I hope you have a lovely Sunday.

        • Neville



          .................................................................... I did and back at ya ..

        • ANGELA & BRIAN

          Angela here - Good Sunday MAXINE - A LADY & A POET as lovely a YOU needs a LOVER - Not just for CHRISTMAS but for LIFE. Since i married BRIAN in MARCH all our senses hae been raised ! Sight - Sound - Scent - Savour & more than anything TOUCH. Our PRAYER f or You MAXINE is *Please GOD please send MAXINE a lovely MN ~ Worhy of her & her lovely FAMILY ~ To LOVE - CHERISH & CARE for them ~ AMEN !*

          Blessings & Joy to You & Yours
          Love Angela Brian & Smokay !!!

          • Maxine Smith

            Thank you Angela.

            Always leaving such kind words.

          • orchidee

            A sensitive write Maxine.
            OK, I'll pop round to keep ya company! Me dog Fido says nothing swoony though. lol. Notice the talking dog there?! heehee.

            • Maxine Smith

              Haha once again, a comment of yours followed by a giggle from me.

              Appreciate the read Orchi.

            • Fay Slimm.

              These beautiful phrases I can relate to my friend - wishing your dreams come true for you soon..........

              • Maxine Smith

                Thanks so much Fay.

                One day ....

                Appreciate the read.

              • Robert Haigh

                Expressions of love, in the many forms it takes. Nice one.

                • Maxine Smith

                  Thanks for stopping by.

                • dusk arising

                  Lovely words expressed at a time in your life when the inner beauty of you is exposed for appreciation and dare i say attraction.... as in a beautiful flower blossoming.
                  Wholesome indeed but a word of warning for predators lurk in even the most poetic places.
                  You have come a long way in life and achieved much. Along the way to today you have gained values, worth and self respect. Guard them well, for to trade them for anything or anyone could be to one day find yourself lost.
                  Take care and enjoy life.

                  • Maxine Smith

                    Thank you for sharing your kind words and concerns.

                    I appreciate it.

                  • Michael Edwards

                    And may you be seen, heard, touched, and devoured - - nothing less than you deserve - and it will come.

                    • Maxine Smith

                      A girl can only dream.

                      Although I have visions of me remaining alone and filling my void with lots of cats .... lol



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