L. B. Mek

Answers: to undreamt questions

idea’s aren’t concrete solutions, initially 

that so many - wishfully: scaffold them to be

they’re merely ambitious steps upon survival’s creaky ladder,

 

you: didn’t earthquake my existence

when my ears first took note, of your greeting’s - tone

nor did my eyesight stutter, blinking-in that magnet silhouette

 

merely a budding hymn, in my breathing

a conduit - scatter-graph of anticipation

fuelling: budding of untameable yearning

 

 

© L. B. Mek

January 2020

Comments9

  • Poetic Dan

    I took my time with your words and so glad I did as when I got to the end I did nothing but nop & grin!!

    Fantastic morning read indeed!
    Always appreciated!

    • L. B. Mek

      wow, am humbled, appreciate you taking the time and giving my scribble a chance, what a fantastic morning comment to start a day with, lol
      Thank you!

      • Poetic Dan

        More than welcome my friend obliviously that word was nod at the end lol

      • dusk arising

        Ideas, as ideas be can be cast aways or the beginning of... well many things and this one takes me on a flight of fancy that..... Well there she was and spoke..... something which knew about sizzling began to sizzle..... an idea was formed and enjoyed..... the rest.... History. n'cest pas?

        • L. B. Mek

          read your comment a few times already, it takes me somewhere different each time,
          much appreciated my friend and erm: 'Oui'-(ish), lol

        • orchidee

          Good write LB.

        • Christina8

          Great write L.B.!!

          • L. B. Mek

            thank you for taking the time to support and comment

          • Jerry Reynolds

            Wow L.B. that's thought-provoking.

            • L. B. Mek

              very kind of you to say Jerry, really appreciate how encouraging your are with your considered comments, much appreciated

            • Robert Haigh

              Words to make the reader think! A good write.

              • L. B. Mek

                yeah, Jerry mentioned that element of the write as well,
                makes it easier to be a little daring with our write's when there are so many talented writers on MPS that willingly try to connect with whatever they're reading, what an amazing gift we share with each other!
                thanks for the support dear Poet

              • Trenz Pruca

                Thank you. I enjoyed reading it. Good poem.

                • L. B. Mek

                  glad you liked it, always appreciate your supportive comments

                • Neville


                  this is absolutely splendid sir .. my mental muscle & appetite for stimulating poetry this early eve is well n truly assuaged ............ now go to the top of the class ya hear ..

                  Neville

                  • L. B. Mek

                    what a true friend: just gota build me up and tug me back down to earth eh -and all done within three lines, (I mean forcing me to look up 'assuaged', pffttt)
                    I initially thought you had sausage planned for dinner or something and your hunger, well: won over... lmao (forgive me, just in a silly mood)
                    thank you kindly dear Sir!

                    • Poetic Dan

                      I had to look that up too! But I'll add a sentiment of to of the class you go!..

                      And I read sausage lmao....

                      Thanks for the giggle!

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Those ideas within us are so well highlighted within your words Mek.

                      Andy

                      • L. B. Mek

                        yeah, was a fun write - glad so many people could relate to it, thanks for the support Andy



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