What happened to you


I can barely recognize you


You’ve been consumed by darkness


You’re filled with rage


You’re heart has been taken over by hate


Love is no longer a familiar emotion


You pushed yourself too far


You can’t come back from this


Your inner demons have won


The voices are as clear as ever


They have taken your last bit of light


You have allowed them to overthrow you


You have lost


You have joined the creatures of the night


They have ripped your soul from your body


You are no longer you


You're a soulless monster












  • FredPeyer

    Well written, Jaay, and the last line says it all.

  • Jason78

    As adults no one can be made into a monster. If you’re getting glimpses of the monster it is only because that person is getting comfortable enough to give you glimpses of who they really are.

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