-JR-1
warming sun
woodpecker tapping
roof shingle
-Linda-2
open some wine
raise our spirit's
-Linda-3
brown sparrow
feeding on scraps
lodged in deck
-JR-4
get some cheese
this more fun then news
-JR-5
snowbird
drinking from
terrace dish
-Linda-6
crescent moon drinks
from birdbath
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Jerry Reynolds (
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Good writes there.
how wonderfully imaginative Jerry, would never have thought to utilise these form's in a conversational format
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Can't take credit for it participation renga has been around for over a 1,000 years. They can be a lot of fun, challenging and go on sometimes for months. Somebody writes a three line Haiku, Senryu or Lune and someone else writes a two line stanza then another writes a three line stanza every fifth stanza mentions the moon. Give it a try you might like it. Here is a short seasonal start.
JR-1
Christmas tree
nude and fragrant
potential pure
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