Well I'm not a builder of bridges
But i
Know how to get to you
I'm not a swimmer of oceans
But I'll
dive to the deep with you
I'm not a keeper of knowledge
But i
Know what I need to
I know someday
Freckled girl
We'll become what we always knew
The distance between us
turned from light to dark
And our love shined on through.
Well I'm not a singer of ballads
But i
Hold a steady tune
I'm not a reader of odysseys
But i
Wondered away my youth
I've never reckoned with reason
But
I reckon we need to
You see someday
Freckled girl
We'll become what we always knew
The distance between us
turned from light to dark
And our love shined on through
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Author:
Edthepoet (
Offline) - Published: December 24th, 2020 09:30
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Comments5
Nice. Appreciate the flow.
Love freckled girls! Particularly girls with freckles in their cleavage.
The past tense of 'shine' is 'shone'.
Not in this poem it isn't 😂
This is a really powerful poem you wrote, and the grammatical error weakens the poem.
I appreciate your feedback Robert. It's not an error, shone instead of shine would weaken the flow. Poetic freedom if you will.
So good to see your name pop up, that's a perfect gift!
Like I said before, incredible flow sat perfectly with my soul!
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
Much appreciated Dan, great to hear from you. Happy holidays my friend
Good Read. Have a Happy Holiday and Stay safe.
Lovely poem
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