PoeticBiscuit

Lack of Courage

I won’t lie,

I’ve thought of suicide,

But realized,

I lack the courage to even die.

Comments4

  • orchidee

    A fine write PB.
    If it was not such a serious theme - 'Oohh, I shouldn't; suicide is very bad for your health, ya know!'
    Or 'I felt like suicide, but have you seen the cost of razor blades these days?!' heehee.
    Or 'I tried to electrocute myself, but there was power cut that day!' lol.

  • orchidee

    Oh dear, I best say something more useful!
    I suppose it takes courage to go on living. Suicide can be a cowardly way out - at times anyway.

  • L. B. Mek

    Congratulations!

  • Poetic Dan

    Bam.. And again..

    I did one recently called dark side of the moon with a tune my daughter played once...

    Needless to say the effects was the same as your rhyme... Shivering down my spine!

    Not sure if this is fantasy or fiction but your spirit has conviction!

    Never lose the write my friend

    Much peace and respect



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