Lack of Courage

PoeticBiscuit

I won’t lie,

I’ve thought of suicide,

But realized,

I lack the courage to even die.

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orchidee January 15th, 2021 03:04
A fine write PB.
If it was not such a serious theme - 'Oohh, I shouldn't; suicide is very bad for your health, ya know!'
Or 'I felt like suicide, but have you seen the cost of razor blades these days?!' heehee.
Or 'I tried to electrocute myself, but there was power cut that day!' lol.
orchidee January 15th, 2021 03:05
Oh dear, I best say something more useful!
I suppose it takes courage to go on living. Suicide can be a cowardly way out - at times anyway.
L. B. Mek January 15th, 2021 05:48
Congratulations!
Poetic Dan January 16th, 2021 08:20
Bam.. And again..

I did one recently called dark side of the moon with a tune my daughter played once...

Needless to say the effects was the same as your rhyme... Shivering down my spine!

Not sure if this is fantasy or fiction but your spirit has conviction!

Never lose the write my friend

Much peace and respect

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