Snow rooftop
You're at the peak of a mountain
Like nuts in triangle
Is that why it's called Toblerone?
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Snow rooftop
You're at the peak of a mountain
Like nuts in triangle
Is that why it's called Toblerone?
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Good write Preeti.
Your poems are pretty enigmatic - to my eyes at least. Would you care to add 'Comment from author...' (entry on right) when you give us your next?
Regards, Dave
Do you like my poem?. is enigmatic good or bad way because I don't mean to confuse the reader.
No, preeti - this one was fairly simple, especially after reading Fred's comment, which gave it even more depth. I looked at some of your earlier poems. Perhaps it's just me. You must make your own judgement - but above all don't take it to heart, don't be put off from writing more!
Dave
Thanks for the comment. I have written another poem called Mango.
'Been there...Thanks.
Preeti, I grew up in Switzerland. That poem is right down my alley! And the reason it is called Toblerone is because it was made by Mr. Tobler. Oh, and by the way, the triangle represents the Matterhorn mountain.
Man, just reading about it makes me want one.
Last time I tried one, (many moons ago) I lost a tooth!
an intriguing dedication to one of my favourite childhood treats,
thanks for sharing
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