Toblerone

preeti

Snow rooftop

You're at the peak of a mountain

Like nuts in triangle

Is that why it's called Toblerone?

  • Author: preeti (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 24th, 2021 06:27
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  • orchidee

    Good write Preeti.

  • Doggerel Dave

    Your poems are pretty enigmatic - to my eyes at least. Would you care to add 'Comment from author...' (entry on right) when you give us your next?

    Regards, Dave

    • preeti

      Do you like my poem?. is enigmatic good or bad way because I don't mean to confuse the reader.

      • Doggerel Dave

        No, preeti - this one was fairly simple, especially after reading Fred's comment, which gave it even more depth. I looked at some of your earlier poems. Perhaps it's just me. You must make your own judgement - but above all don't take it to heart, don't be put off from writing more!

        Dave

        • preeti

          Thanks for the comment. I have written another poem called Mango.

          • Doggerel Dave

            'Been there...Thanks.

          • FredPeyer

            Preeti, I grew up in Switzerland. That poem is right down my alley! And the reason it is called Toblerone is because it was made by Mr. Tobler. Oh, and by the way, the triangle represents the Matterhorn mountain.
            Man, just reading about it makes me want one.

            • Doggerel Dave

              Last time I tried one, (many moons ago) I lost a tooth!

            • L. B. Mek

              an intriguing dedication to one of my favourite childhood treats,
              thanks for sharing



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