preeti

Haiku 1

Salty marshes

leaves me tasteless so I

Even left with laughter.

Comments2

  • Jerry Reynolds

    the crescent moon
    sips from the lake.

  • L. B. Mek

    clever write both in word choices and broken form utilisation, with an equally meaningful message
    (though maybe more accurate to title your series:
    'In Search of Haiku')



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