AND NOT AT ALL, TOO

shadow424

forested words,

engine emotions,

 

unwilling, un-trying,

in the untold

of where we

exist

in separate

pastures

in the same

room,

carrying water

to overflow

the fire,

 

while

presenting

a eulogy

to the area between

where safety

treats a shadow

with a name

as if a friend

  • Author: shadow424 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 19th, 2021 06:01
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • L. B. Mek

    'a eulogy
    to the area between
    where safety
    treats a shadow
    with a name
    as if a friend'..
    had to read this five or more times, for my limited IQ to comprehend just how profound and insightful your words capture the 'far too ugly' - veracity, of our cripplingly degrading reality:
    we lucky few with relationships to lean-on
    do so, while busily marking out our own safety zones
    families going for days without a word spoken between them
    not out of animosity or lingering quarrels, instead
    as our adopted natural state, huddled in-front of handheld screens
    where strangers indulge our weakness to procrastinations - whim
    and consequence is dealt with by a mere delete button
    existing a mere backspace away - to that quick escape
    from our abundance of ignorant mistakes..
    who needs words like duty, integrity and introspection
    in pixel screen realm's
    where right and wrong, is just a matter of perception..
    purposely regressing
    our evolutionary need to progress - willingly
    because cup-noodles are but 50p
    and our tap water runs free,
    why harbour ambitions
    when we can dream-up our own solace
    to that nightmare circumstance of failure
    from a few sips of short-lived alcoholic distractions
    or chain smoke those fears
    into that polluting dust of marginalised regret..
    soon: they will start surgically inserting circuit boards
    in our heads - to counteract the damage
    from generationally inept development
    of our collective intellect
    and the tabloids will be highlighting
    jus how much demand surpasses - supply...



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