TREASURES OF THE SNOW

Amon

For a little while I suffered grief in fiery trials
Solid and stagnant like snow,
Everything was a full stop
Divers troubles had befallen me
Barriers I had to break with perseverance
Warming the snowflake to see its other side
To taste the hidden treasures of the snow

Amon

  • Author: Amon (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 20th, 2021 04:21
  • Comment from author about the poem: Perseverance
  • Category: Short story
  • Views: 29
  • Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek
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  • dusk arising

    "Divers troubles had befallen me" - the 'bends' perhaps - or running out of oxygen - a shark attack perhaps?
    I think you may have meant 'diverse troubles' but thanks for a good laugh.

  • L. B. Mek

    brilliant!

    • Amon

      thanks

    • orchidee

      Good write Amon.

      • Amon

        thanks

      • Amon

        thanks Dusk but my 'divers' here is an adjective meaning several; of varying types



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