Fall Out

Neville

Fall Out

 

… She had personality, passion and purpose

But having dropped yet another stitch …

 

… She looked up from her shawl and said

Fuck it, now I’m going to drop them all …

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 22nd, 2021 04:00
  • Comment from author about the poem: if she had but only satire, she may not have dropped that stitch ...
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 51
  • Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek
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  • Fay Slimm.

    Hhmmm - - Intriguing again mon ami - and passionate indeed when dropped stitches bring a complete end to work satisfaction - - a satirically less serious expletive could have saved the first drop I do agree............

    • Neville



      the fact that she sat lower was probably a blessing in hindsight ........ ta and muchly too dear Fay ...

    • orchidee

      Ahh, sounds like someone's having fun there - or about to! Swoon! I knew it would be too much for me. lol

      • Neville



        .............. thank you Orchidee am glad I could count on your inadvertent discretion ... swooning comes in handy some times .. particularly when you need a good alibi ...

        • orchidee

          I DID meet that lass - that was the trouble! lol.

        • Doggerel Dave

          Oh leave her be, will ya - she sounds like a feisty woman who knew her own mind and above all when to cut her losses....

          • Neville



            ........................................................ that she did .. and always .......... cheers Dave 🙂

          • dusk arising

            Fed up with her station of abstenance she decided to let it roll.

            I like the way you tease your readers here.

            • Neville



              ............... a tease is as good as a rest dont'cha fink DA .. ta my friend and thanks no end ...

            • Jerry Reynolds

              Good write, Neville. It never leaves, just rambles around the ghetto of your mind.

              • Neville



                ....................... ghettyou JR .. and thanks a zillion for re-minding me 🙂

              • Dove

                If she were knitting, then dropping a stitch is common, knit and purl, but if she’s bare underneath the knitted shawl, then it would be purr lol

                • Neville



                  ... my word, you have such a way with words RB but even better than that ... tis good to see you here ..

                • L. B. Mek

                  as ever, quick with the wit and far too deep
                  when deciphering that cancerous - threat
                  to humanity's essential requirement, for survival
                  see, taken as a solitary case - study, this write - be a fun read
                  but when you consider
                  an entire generation has now been convinced
                  they need not pick-out that thread - to begin with
                  or lift a needle: only - to struggle with
                  only then do we readers, get a glimpse
                  at just how far-reaching and true
                  your words read...
                  clever and unerringly acute, yet for me: a truly foreboding read
                  a brilliant shorty, my friend!
                  would take me a few pages trying to unfurl its layers
                  and there-in exists the majesty, within our beloved poetry

                  • Neville



                    Just for the record folks .. I wanna hire this guy for my press agent & legal rep ... and let it be known .. on the B side .. I really do appreciate the uplifting comments that this guy just pinned to my page ............................. Neville



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