stepping out
of a fog,
the air was
full,
I felt the road
differently
while
walking between
seasons
under jeweled
clouds
as shade
spread wide
over the face
of still waters,
brushing
familiar breezes
through the
hair of travelers
- Author: shadow424 ( Offline)
- Published: May 10th, 2021 07:17
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Comments3
Beautiful, lyrical and melodious
Thank you. Wonderful images.
wonderfully serene words that seep-in: soothingly, ever subtly..
reminds me of Tang Dynasty poetry, in style
like that of Li Po (or Li Bai.. etc):
'You ask me why I dwell in the green mountain;
I smile and make no reply for my heart is free of care.
As the peach-blossom flows down stream and is gone into the unknown,
I have a world apart that is not among men.'
from an abbreviated version of his Poetry
sometimes titled 'Green Mountain':
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-22489 )
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