Never say a word;
afraid it will fracture this fragile force.
A tiny, delicate bird’s egg;
if I mishandle it, it will shatter
& this moment will be gone, lost.
I’m afraid it’s not real.
I do not want it to be real.
Bound me in your nutshell,
build me a brave bird’s nest.
Let our fragile egg find rest there
& we can cover it.
You’ll keep it warm
& I’ll whisper
stories of you.
- Author: rebmasters ( Offline)
- Published: May 13th, 2021 04:21
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'Bound me in your nutshell,
build me a brave bird’s nest.
Let our fragile egg find rest'
'if I mishandle it, it will shatter
& this moment will be gone, lost.
I’m afraid it’s not real.'
'we can cover it.
You’ll keep it warm
& I’ll whisper'...
Brilliant!
How well you depict our crippling tension of apprehension
that consumes us, when anything worthwhile
enters our lives
(please forgive me for rearranging the layout of your poetry
I meant no disrespect, just my overzealous nature
to showcase the unassuming craft you put in to your style
of instinctively woven artistry)
Thank you and no need to apologise - they are never finished, just abandoned as some writer (I forget who) once said
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