Evergreen

I Can’t Explain It

                         

Comments3

  • orchidee

    Ooh the words have not appeared.
    Well, you said there are some feelings you can't put into words. A silent poem there?!

  • MendedFences27

    It's a bit short, Is this what they call a Loku? Your feelings are laid bare here for all to see and appreciate. The minimalist approach you have used here, leaves the reader wanting more. I for one love the intense lack verbalization. It reaches into the heart of the reader. The printed word would simply spoil the expression of emptiness you feel. One thing though, I believe you misspelled. - Phil A.

  • Robert Haigh

    Reminds me of that famous painting, "White Cat in a Snowstorm."



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