A Box Full of Maybe’s
Satori days
such as these,
just don’t happen
all that often …
But,
and it’s a
very
BIG BUT
indeed ...
When they do,
it’s like
opening slow,
a box full of maybe’s …
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Author:
Neville (
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Kensho - seeing ones essence. A day to sit among natural wonders and let life begin it's teachings again.
... thank you DA I am indeed truly grateful for your consideration of my most recent scribble ..
... Neville
Bending to change can bring an awakening - - and that is no maybe my satorical friend. A write to remember for poets like me.
............................ Just like Mr. Kipling's cakes ma'am, you are exceedingly good ................. N ... x
Maybe I will like this poem. Yep, I sure do, as usual!
Maybe - I will meet one of them gals soon too.
................... Let's hope so Mr. O .. and in the interim, I thank you kindly ..
Neville
'life's like, a box of Maybe's
we never know
which one, we're meant to harvest'..
a brilliant write my friend
lulled me into a satori observation, of my own
I think I'm a fan of your poetry;
oh wait, I confessed that - already
and oh - so, very Proudly...!
😁😎🍻
........................... and you, my dear literary friend, are far too generous for words ............
... Neville
I dunno – and as I’ve made it plain elsewhere, believe I most probably will never know…and maybe, I sometimes think, maybe that’s enlightenment… or perhaps enlightenment is the thought I may be wrong…then perhaps your position that it don’t happen all that often …
Anyway Neville....
... Ah' but ya never know, do ya squire .. it aint over till the fat lady sings .. As for me, well I'm like a Monkee .. I'm a believer ............. ta for popping in regardless DD ..
Neville
Well written, Neville. Sometimes chance and destiny collide and for one moment it all makes sense.
.............. absolutely JR .. and dont it just ... many thanks to you sir ........... Neville
Well I hope the enjoyable days come more often, I’ll take a box of maybes and trade you for a box of chocolates! Smiles
.... make em Maltesers and you gotta deal missy .................. thanks a bunch dove me luv .. x
A box of maybes is still better than a box of no's, yes? ; )
... absolutely maybe, perhaps .................................. cheers my well penned friend ..
... Neville
Wow, that is all I can say. Superb.
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Wow.. on behalf of both me and my little scribble, I thank you and true ... Indeed, we both feel metaphorically hugged .. Warmest best wishes and All Good Things,
... Neville
Much more than a scribble,. A box full of maybe's perhaps. Thank you for the poem.
... How extraordinarily bloomin kind .. Many thank you's my friend ...
... Neville
maybe......
no reason to elaborate, thanks
................... absolutely maybe .. perhaps ... thank you Mohan most definitely ... N
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