yellowrose

The sun shines

The sun shines in the blue sky like a star that never gives up 

standing still , a lamp that lives in waves of yellow 

a circle of colourful contentment 

smiling serenity on spring and summer days 

a warm flame by a blue sea 

standing still without a rock below her feet 

 

she is a lamp living wisely with a happiness that never leaves 

Even when the clouds collect in the blue 

she’s still there smiling sweetly 

lovingly glowing like a rainbow in the rain 


the clouds may speak of rain but she continues to smile in a sunflower settled like manner 

a merry yellow contentment standing without a rock 

singing in the blue 

a lovely lamp of vibrancy 

 

you never see tears fall, raindrops or snow drifting and crying from her sunflower petals 

no , she never cries , at least  we cannot see when the yellow speaks so sweetly 

warming our skin 

speaking silently in her colourful circle of contentment 

so seemingly happy but we can never hear a word , a song , a laugh 

 

the yellow speaks of all these 

a happy girl living in the sky 

letting us know through her personality that she is ok 

vibrant , and joyful 

she doesn’t have to laugh , sing sounds , even talk 

she can simply smile at us in her colourful circle of yellow 

be a sunflower smiling in the blue 

the sun standing without a rock below her feet 

Comments8

  • dusk arising

    Delightful. Such character you have given our life giving star. Even a pair of feet. Maybe she bathes those hard working feet when the clouds bring us rain..... well who can tell when she's out of sight?

    • yellowrose

      Hello dusk arising , Thankyou πŸ™‚ maybe she does bathe her feet , and maybe she is sometimes sad .., even tho she has a yellow personality .... because even people who are seemingly full of joy , even they have their tears .., sometimes ,

      • yellowrose

        I’m not sure why I gave the sun feet .,, lol .

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      • Brimelow

        Lovely Yellowrose πŸ™‚ I enjoyed the exploration of the sun's simplicity in performing it's duty - never crying, always shining, always serene, always smiling without expectation of reward or recognition.

        • yellowrose

          Thankyou brimelow πŸ™‚ it does look to be smiling ... yellow looks like a joyful happy colour . But maybe when she disappears ... maybe it’s then that she cries .., when she’s not appearing in the sky ,

          Thanks for the comment

        • orchidee

          A fine write Rose.

          • yellowrose

            Thankyou orchidee πŸ™‚ appreciate your comment

          • Fay Slimm.

            A beautiful tribute to our glorious sun - thank you Rose for sharing its sense of contentment with what and where it is..

          • yellowrose

            Hi teddy πŸ™‚ I’m not sure what I meant when I wrote β€œ without a rock below her feet β€œ maybe the sunshine strength and inability to fall ... she doesn’t need a rock , because she will never fall . Sometimes I write lines and I’m not always sure what I mean ... but I like the way it sounds so I just write it lol

            • Teddy.15

              as i am actually married to a great italian physicist i see more deeply into this. i love your last lines, and would have to say you're a fabulous poet. which is the rock below her? fabulous stuff

              i'd say i see happiness and lots and lots of colour.

            • Jerry Reynolds

              Enjoyed your tribute to the sun, Rose.

              • yellowrose

                Thankyou Jerry πŸ™‚ I’m glad you enjoyed this

              • Goldfinch60

                May that sun be forever there for us within your wonderful words yellowrose.

                Andy

                • yellowrose

                  Thankyou for your kind comment , Andy πŸ™‚

                • Accidental Poet

                  I think the Sun may be blushing slightly but proud of being the subject of your words Rose. A great piece. ; )

                  • yellowrose

                    Thankyou AP πŸ™‚πŸ™‚ that’s kind of you to say . The sun is so nice . I like writing around nature . Glad you enjoyed this



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