Naida's Evening

Trenz Pruca

After two more
Baby Blue Eyes
and hair strokes
in the room,
the door closes
enough to confirm
conscious ears. Whew!
Usually.

  • Author: Trenz Pruca (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 6th, 2021 12:54
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  • Neville


    ... there is most definitely something here that works for me ..

    ... intrigue till the very end ...

    • Trenz Pruca

      Thank you. I appreciate your comment and so does Naida.

    • L. B. Mek

      reminds me of tiptoeing out
      with the door left ajar, after putting
      an energetic troublemaker to bed
      then silently, pensively
      lurking outside the door
      looking back, just to insure
      they were not feigning being asleep
      cos you know
      if they don't get that timely rest
      the waking-up wars, in the morning
      will be unending... lol
      (sorry for I've hijacked
      your original meaning for this write
      to some unfathomed realm, of interpretation) lol
      thanks for sharing, dear poet

      • Trenz Pruca

        Thank you for your kind comment and the imagery.



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