A Stillbeat Heart

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  iAli July 15th, 2021 23:33

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  L. B. Mek July 16th, 2021 03:37

  in one of my write's, I think I wrote
  'dear self, forgive me
  for falling in love with each syllable
  of those lies: just, so-as to survive'
  (or something similar),
  and I can't help but recognise that same theme
  or message in your write as well;
  it's so true how we like to twist ourselves
  into knots, just by layering our lies
  one on top of the other, fearing
  if we admit to ourselves, our capacity
  to distort our own reality, we won't
  have anywhere to hide
  and blame
  and hate
  then, what would we do
  with all that repressed, festering resentment...
  'In confines
  it moans and cries
  led horribly astray.'
  
  'In the dark
  a stillbeat heart
  imprisoned by the lie.'
  (a wonderful read, dear poet
  with an important message,
  thanks for choosing to share)

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    Jack CohenJuly 16th, 2021 10:51

    Thanks for the incite, I appreciate it!