L. B. Mek

It’s, in the way

 

It’s, in the way 

she cradles her baby with one arm

while calloused fingertips - dip

testing, searing temperatures 

with her instinctive thermometer 

 

or, after labouring all day

finding enough - energy

to smile wholeheartedly, altruistically

for that other, needy 

she loves: so dearly.

 

 

© L. B. Mek

September 2020

Comments9

  • Neil Higgins

    Hope I'm reading this correct L.B.
    A woman's labours are never finished it seems.And it is so true my friend.

    • L. B. Mek

      yup, a pitiful (in context) dedication
      to those wonderful nurturers, who manage
      to cultivate and sustain
      that eco system, we call: a unified home.
      an old fashioned sentiment, maybe
      but a worthy endeavour, for the few that still find worth
      in being an anchor for those they love.
      thanks for the proactive attempt to relate-to
      and interpret, my scribble - for others to understand
      appreciate your generosity, dear poet

    • SureshG

      Female labors all day long,
      the male expects her to still perform

      - smilingly

      • L. B. Mek

        thankfully, that's being corrected
        at least in more modernised societies
        where the workload/responsibilities
        is being balanced-out and shared
        without chauvinistic prejudice to get in the way,
        this write, is less political in context
        more of a championing - dedication
        to those who 'choose' - to evolve, into that pillar
        of a loving foundation and insure their family
        blossoms and thrives,
        i.e. the true superheroes of society!
        (thanks for the insightful
        and empathetic comment, dear poet)

      • Neville


        a perfect ending to a very long day .. thank you ever so much and kindly

        • L. B. Mek

          yeah this gruelling weather's got me up early
          otherwise me and my keyboard, would melt away... lol
          hopefully starts to cool down by Thursday 🙏🤞
          thanks for the encouraging comment my friend
          glad you could find some solace in my humble scribble

        • Saxon Crow

          A mother's love conquers all obstacles. A lovely poem LB 🙂

          • L. B. Mek

            perfectly and poignantly summarised!
            thank you dear poet

          • Goldfinch60

            That love between a mother and baby will never fail no matter what pressure comes in her life.

            Andy

            • L. B. Mek

              yeah, but sadly - not always the case
              but that's why we need to appreciate
              the good one's, when we can..
              that's all, that these words were meant to celebrate
              and convey, that - superhuman nature
              of a nurturer's capacity, to overcome
              and imbue love, in every hurdle
              they come across..
              thanks Andy
              such a warm and sincere comment

            • John Prophet

              Very nice, short but sweet.

              • L. B. Mek

                yeah, that was my initial attraction on first read/edit
                as I too gravitated towards its sweet
                and rather romantic tones, as well
                thank you for highlighting that subtle element
                of this token dedication, dear poet

              • Poetic Dan

                Even when being mindful I know I'm not for all that she gives is what I can not...

                Oooo I got a great picture to go with that, always a pleasure to get your inspiration in blink and tap!

                • L. B. Mek

                  blink and tap, as we plod along and plot
                  our songs, on those qwerty keys of hope
                  serenading, all we cherish
                  in recognition
                  of those we owe for lightening our loads, through
                  the speed bump - hurdles
                  and shining that appeasing torch
                  in those dark roads
                  of our chosen, jarring - paths
                  of life

                • PrEm Ji

                  My God has the countenance of a woman...

                  • L. B. Mek

                    thanks for commenting/supporting dear poet
                    indeed, we should treasure
                    all the unassuming - good, nourishing our lives
                    whilst: we have the chance...

                  • The elder poet

                    The feelings of a mother for her child.Such warm felling . Thank you for sharing.

                    • L. B. Mek

                      essentially, that unassuming quality
                      of dedication and passion
                      we - too often, take for granted
                      in those nurturers
                      we're so fortunate: to have Brighten
                      our lives..
                      thanks for the supportive comment, dear poet

                      • The elder poet

                        You are welcome. I just joined this site. I really like it . Some really talented poets here.



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