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Kurt Philip Behm

The road taken,

a path unwalked,

direction unto fate

 

A choice is made,

the debt unpaid

—redemption coming late

 

(Dreamsleep: July, 2021)

 

 

Left Of Center

 

Lost in confusion,

distracted by tomorrow

anxiety his lover

—memory undreamed

 

(Dreamsleep: July, 2021)

  • Author: Kurt Philip Behm (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 22nd, 2021 08:25
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  • L. B. Mek

    few people, truly understand
    the historical and life-costly, morose
    context
    in the 'slight of word', trickery
    Robert Frost utilised
    in 'The Road not Taken'
    and so frustratingly, it will forever remain
    an admired poem, with a treasured
    tag-line,
    that most will misunderstand: but, sadly
    that's, by design
    as Frost's chose to showcase his intellect
    than word, his essential wisdom: accessible...
    that's that element of 'elitism;
    in some poetry traditions, intended to keep
    this wonderful vehicle we have
    to disseminate, enrich and enlighten
    what little useful insight, we glean
    to those most in need
    of worded gateways, to understanding
    the commonalities in life's, complex difficulties..
    and that's why, I personally
    prefer writer's who - when necessary
    will purposely, insure their wording is easily
    comprehendible, while still maintaining
    its poetic and artistic: integrity,
    championing their poetry's
    humane - quality, of humility
    like you: dear poet
    as your two poems today
    word the message 'Frost - hid'
    in such a meaningfully accessible way:
    *Delivery, Left Of Center
    'a path unwalked,
    direction unto fate

    A choice is made,'

    'Lost in confusion,
    distracted by tomorrow'

    *'—redemption coming late'
    'anxiety his lover'
    (there's such a profoundly compassionate quality
    to the write's you choose to share Kurt
    and they're often meaningful, at so many levels;
    please, forgive me for once more
    creating a fusion
    of your two brilliant poems
    just so that I can greedily/rudely
    highlight my point)


  • Kurt Philip Behm

    Thanks again LB. My favorite Robert Frost quote:

    "Writing poetry that doesn't rhyme is like playing tennis without a net."

    🙂



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