Teddy.15

Nonsense In The Air

 

On top of the never fading Rainbow, made of gold

Sits a pink Camel, playing a tiny banjo

 

From down below the clouds 

Giggle at such a sight

And the purple rain jumps up from the crowd 

to chime in tune with the musical delight

 

All the while the sun is searching for his hat

Lightning strikes the paper Ark, that’s tumbling in flight

 

And as a million sweets fall from the Giant’s sack

Onto the heads of the fire flies bright

 

The Dodo

Awakens from a very long nap

 

Rollerblading in circles hoping to see…

 

What all the fuss is about? 

Comments10

  • Goldfinch60

    Wonderful fun filled words Teddy, my first giggle of the day, thank you.

    Andy

    • Teddy.15

      wow, thank you dear Andy, i love experimenting and today just seemed a good day.

    • Neville


      much more than what it might at first appear .. almost Lewis Carroll .. would make a brill short animated film or children's book .. enjoyed far more than an old fella should ever admit ................................:)

      • Teddy.15

        thank you dear Neville, what a wonderful compliment you give. i love creativity so i really appreciate what you have said.

      • Doggerel Dave

        Fun, Teddy.

        • Teddy.15

          hello Dave so glad you enjoyed the fun, you are always very welcome. Thank you.

          • Doggerel Dave

            You are welcome ,Teddy.

          • yellowrose

            Fun write , teddy 🙂 I love it ..., very nice

            • Teddy.15

              hello dear yellowrose, so glad you have enjoyed this nonsense poem. Thank you x

            • Neil Higgins

              I love so called nonsense rhyme.Its not of course.Its very clever and well written.You have made me smile this morning Teddy.
              "A pink camel,playing a tiny banjo"
              Must have been a great night in the pub.I nearly fell in the canal after reading that.

              • Teddy.15

                lol i'm almost jealous you were in a british pub, one of the things i truly miss about England. good to know you had a great day and that my poem has done it's job as your hang over cure. lol thank you.

              • orchidee

                Good write Teddy. lol.

                • Teddy.15

                  lol ah thank you dear Orchi.

                • dusk arising

                  My kinda stuff. Why try to make sense of the world when nonsence is so much more entertaining? How deeply buried is the rainbow's string and where are the bloomin arrows anyway?

                  • Teddy.15

                    nonsense is more fun at the moment even for me Dusk, it's a cruel world so lets just live here for today. Thank you dear poet.

                  • Saxon Crow

                    You're totally on form Teddy. Another very enjoyable poem

                    • Teddy.15

                      It's always a joy to know what type poetry the reader enjoys Sax, I'm honoured you approve. Thank you buddy.

                    • Accidental Poet

                      A little nonsense never hurt anyone. Wonderful playful write in the air Teddy. 😎

                      • Teddy.15

                        Absolute nonsense indeed 🤣 thank you as always dear A.P it's my pleasure

                        • Accidental Poet

                          And ours. 😁

                        • Jerry Reynolds

                          Fun, Fun, Teddy.
                          You inspired dusk and together you have really done it today. A very much-needed lift.

                          • Teddy.15

                            What an honour that you would find this such fun, so very pleased you enjoyed dear Jerry, it can't always be so serious, today is a great day. Thank you.



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