Fay Slimm.





The tune of earth's fire and water affair 

re-fashions this planet with abandon.

         Its active collusion shows musical flair            

yet never a note becomes entangled.


Welcome these universal facts now taught  

that every vast chorus clashes with naught.



  • Doggerel Dave

    Lovely piece, Fay - just wish it were true......

  • dusk arising

    oooh and ouch Fay. A bit contravertial in this weird global july/august with disasters all over the place.

    On second thoughts though, they are disasters for life as WE know it and not for planet earth. Though, regardless of cause, I cant welcome todays type of changes.

    But my, you do dress them nicely here.

  • MendedFences27

    The Earth actually produces a sound as it spins on its axis. This and the sounds of other planets are sometimes referred to as the "Music of the Spheres." Surely, that sound would be "re-fashions" as the "Fire and water affair" alters the planet. My comments are meant to support your image of "Music" from this planet, and to praise your six lines of 'Music " of another sort. Sweet words, Fay -Phil A.

  • Accidental Poet

    The music of Mother Earth combined with your lyrics is a beautiful work of art Fay. I believe you've made Mother Earth smile with this write. 👍

  • SureshG

    If not for the dance between fire and water, life as we know won’t have a foothold to stand on, and poetic words, such as yours, to romance us.

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