Wait! Thee My Love

Beyond my life

I’ll be there

Blessed with the death

I had…….


Beyond my life

I’ll be with thee

Beholding the bloom

We cherished…..


Until then let me live

In the life assigned ….

Until then let me be a rune

That whispers thy breath in tune


Wait till then

Thee my breath….

Till I am

Freed by death


Wait till then

I behold my breath

To play the tune

For you my love


Forever with thee

On ‘n on ‘n on ‘n on…….

Forever my dear

On ‘n on ‘n on ‘n on…….


  • The elder poet

    I would say true love . For ever and a day. Very nice poem.

    • VINOD R S

      Highly excited to have your comments. Thanks a lot sir

      • The elder poet

        Thank you for sharing your work.You have a great day .

      • L. B. Mek

        beautiful, in conception
        really well executed
        something different, a throwback
        and a wonderful read,
        thanks for choosing to share

        • VINOD R S

          Unexpected words from the opposite of the globe. Boundlessly blessed. Thanks a lot, sir.

        • Abhi

          Lines recreates the fragrance of love,depth of sorrow and even the reality also be admitted with a grief that every one has to move on..but love never dies...touching..😍 beautifully articulated..

          • VINOD R S

            Great to have all the encouragement. Thanks a lot

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