For break it may , and so it shall
My heart, my soul, teardrops command
To weep these tears upon my hands
For, break it may and so it shall
This heartbreaking pain within me
My splintered soul for all to see
For, break it may and so it shall
My heart, my soul, teardrops command
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Dove, I can't read that font I'm sorry.
Ok, changed hopes it’s better!
I know just where this sentiment comes from. The state of desperation and deep feeling of worthlessness when your heart is truly broken.
I re-read it several times settling in the end to read the coloured lines only once each time which for me emphasised the pain in the words.
Thank you for changing the font, it was worth it.
You’re welcome!
Took me a while as I honestly thought it was a different language but beautifully sad and each teardrop is unique to you!
Thanks for sharing
Thanks Dan! I changed the fonts , thanks for the read
this poems is a baroque teardrop
of versed emotional bravery!
deftly executed, and I'm with Dusk
this words are impactful enough, without
the repeated chorus or colouring
(but its perfectly beautiful as it is, dear poet)
thanks for sharing
Thanks Mek, I appreciate your honesty and compliments,! Much appreciated
to suggest this is impressive would be a massive understatement ..
made me come over all unnecessary so it did ..............................................N
Awe, Thanks so much dearest Neville! I appreciate the stop over!
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