The Angle of Her Lay

Neville

The Angle of Her Lay

 

Depending on the time of day

he might well

choose to rise and meet her

halfway perhaps

beneath that flimsy cotton

bodice top ..

below her shift, her slip or stay ..

Oh’ dear lord

he cried; she has the profile of

a feline and

the subtle curve of a swans neck

feeding ….

Oh’ yes, she does

and just between the you and me

Depending

on the angle of her lay …  

Somewhere

between the hollow of her

shoulders

and the very gentlest of sways

Her back

would arc to greet him

as she bites her lip and blushes

and she prays that he

her lover might just stay another day

 

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  • Fay Slimm.

    A romantically intimate moment to sigh for and versed to perfection by your expertise mon ami......... I truly admire the inter-rhyming that brings it alive even more..............x

    • Neville



      bless you Fay .. x

    • orchidee

      Might have to swoon at this! And should I meet her?! lol.

      • Neville



        No doubt about it Mr. O ... this one would make anyone swoon ....................... n truly πŸ™‚

      • dusk arising

        Wimmin, I'll never understand them... and you dont help, now i'm bluddy confused too.

        • Neville



          Or maybe U R just mez mur I zd .......... or summat ............... πŸ™‚

        • Poetic Dan

          Oooo felt heat from this my friend!

          • Neville



            I take it that's a yes then .............................. cheers Dan πŸ™‚

          • Laura🌻

            Neville,

            Hopefully her wish
            is his command.
            A wonderfully penned poem.

            Thank you for sharing my dear Poet.

            Laura🌻

            • Neville



              and what could be better than that to digest over my breakfast honey toast and porridge .. thank you so much my friend 🌻 πŸ™‚

            • Accidental Poet

              A very sensuous pen under your command N. πŸ‘

              • Neville



                she is my pen friend, my friend ..................... and thank you no end πŸ™‚

                • Accidental Poet

                  😊

                • Doggerel Dave


                  A leisurely ride over some interesting cuntry, Nev. (As Hamlet might have said....)

                  • Neville



                    Thank you for contributing to this, my latest little scribble DD each n every offering appreciated ........................ N

                  • L. B. Mek

                    crazy, how with hindsight
                    all that we couldn't fathom
                    becomes so glaringly understandable,
                    its just a little unfair
                    how it often arrives, a little too late
                    for those willing to hold-on and fight...
                    another wonderful poetic treat, dear poet
                    captured the poetic voice with such sincerity

                    • Neville



                      Thank you L.B and as always, very muchly ....................... Neville

                    • myself and me

                      Now I know who to blame for the hot summer night.

                      • Neville



                        cant beat a strawberry mivvi can ya ........................................... πŸ™‚

                      • Dove

                        Exquisite! What a wonderful description, and dare I say I am jealous of the gorgeous profile

                        • Neville


                          no need .. but I do seriously thank thee ..................... πŸ™‚ x



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