The elder poet

As she lays here beside me. 

Her hair is slightly mused .

Ruby lips that pout before me

I know are full of lust.


Inviting me to join her .

In her passion and her wine.

She tries hard to excite me.

She can do it every time.


So soft and tender to my fingers .

Hidden pleasures that I find.

Life goes on around us .

To this world we might seem blind.


No sense of time invades us .

Only climax brings an end.

Not wanting to with draw from her. 

My lover and my friend.


  • Author: The elder poet (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 19th, 2021 10:22
  • Comment from author about the poem: Passions from the past . Never far from my thoughts.
  • Category: Erotic
  • Views: 38
  • Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet
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  • Coyote

    That's an amazing feeling and you capture it beautifully here my friend. Nice work.

    • The elder poet

      Thank you for saying so. And thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
      You have a good day.

    • Fay Slimm.

      You catch those passionate moments so well with each stanza beautifully rhymed and the final line warms the heart even more. Being a lover and also a friend is surely a relationship to cherish.

      • The elder poet

        Thank you so much for the very nice comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it . Fay . You have a good day

      • Accidental Poet

        Somebody's gonna need a cold shower ep. Great write, 😜

        • The elder poet

          LOL . Yep. I'm bad . I have a couple more like this one. Then I'll start sharing some of my childhood stories. Thank you for commenting. Have a good night.

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